# Write the email or message you've been putting off A sendable draft, in the tone you actually want, for the message you keep opening and closing without sending. **Time:** 6 minutes **What you'll have when you're done:** A sendable draft in the tone you want. ---Some messages are easy: the words come out fine. This is about the other kind, the ones you've drafted three times in your head and never sent, because getting the tone wrong feels worse than not sending it at all. If this is specifically a dispute, a cancellation that's resisting, or a formal complaint, the [dispute and complaint letter guide](/guides/foundations/the-letter-youve-been-putting-off/) walks through that narrower, higher-stakes case in more depth. This one is for everything else: the apology, the awkward ask, the message to a friend or coworker you've been avoiding. --- ## Do this 1. **Say who it's for and what happened**, in your own words, however messy. 2. **Say what you actually want to happen next.** An apology, an answer, a change, closure. Be honest with yourself here even if you soften it in the message. 3. **Pick a tone**: warm, neutral, or firm. 4. **Ask for a draft**, using the prompt below. 5. **Read it out loud.** If a sentence doesn't sound like something you'd say, that's the one to fix, not the whole draft. ``` Who this is to: [relationship/context, no need for their full name] What happened: [your version, in your own words] What I want to happen next: [the actual outcome, plainly stated] Tone: [warm / neutral / firm] Write a draft message. Keep it as short as the situation allows. Don't over-explain or over-apologize unless that's genuinely what I'm going for. ``` --- ## Check this before you trust it - **Every fact stated as certain.** A date, a promise, a dollar figure. If you didn't give it that detail, it may have invented a plausible-sounding one. - **The tone against how you'd actually talk to this person.** A draft that's technically warm can still read as stiff if it doesn't sound like you. - **Anything that commits you to something you haven't decided on yet.** --- ## If it goes wrong **It sounds generic, like it could be from anyone to anyone.** Give it one sentence you would actually say in this situation, and ask it to match that voice for the rest. **It's too long.** Ask for it cut by half, keeping only the sentence that matters most. A short message people actually read beats a thorough one they skim. **It's technically right but you still don't want to send it.** That's worth listening to. Sometimes the resistance isn't about the wording, it's about the decision itself. Sit with that before drafting a fourth version. **The tone landed wrong once you reread it a day later.** Rewrite the tone prompt more specifically: instead of "warm," try "warm but not apologetic" or "firm but not cold." The single-word tone labels are a starting point, not the whole instruction. ---

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